Talk:Super Smash Bros. Ultimate: Demo Version/@comment-173.73.161.7-20181113125538/@comment-189.33.53.75-20190730202413

It's alright, but it still needs improvement. The cliché is that you used blood and gore without any buildup, meaning that there's some little bit of failure. Don't worry. With some little polish and rewrites, it would get in my book.