Talk:VOICEBOX: A Ticci Toby love story/@comment-39534673-20190901001344

This is how you bore the reader in the most painful way.

This story wastes your time and brain cells until there is nothing left of you. It's terrible in every level imaginable:

- The main character is a Mary Sue. Not a funny Mary Sue like Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, but a very bland, boring, edgy and unlikable one, just like everyone else in this story;

- Pointless scenes and exposition. The story drags itself way too much. There are chapters full of characters doing absolutely nothing but mundane stuff like brushing their hair, eating dinner, having a shower, sleeping, etc. I mean, god! They are supernatural people with super powers and stuff. Make them do something badass like shooting lazer, flying, beating people up or something. At least I would be entertained.

- Everyone except the main characters are just for show. They don't do anything meaningful or interesting.

- Terrible formatting, which makes the story almost unbearable to read

I wouldn't recommend it even for the lulz because it's not a "so bad it's funny" type of text. It's just unbelievably boring and cringy.