Talk:Mario Kart Black/@comment-33933759-20190226000242

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That was... Interesting. If you could maybe, cut out some of the fluff and violence, it would be in a MUCH better state than it already is.

My rating? D. If you could improve in not making this a HUGE all of text, cut the fluff and the Satan worshipping, it would be good enough for B-C standard.

👍Keep writing, keep improving. I'm sure you'll become a great author.