Talk:Super Smash Bros. Ultimate: Demo Version/@comment-173.73.161.7-20181113125538/@comment-72.28.163.203-20190304165201

It's not very good, as it includes cliches that have been horribly overdone (such as blood and gore randomly being introduced without buildup). One thing I will give it credit for is that you at least gave us an explanation for all the bloody stuff in the game, unlike MOST gaming creepypastas (looking at you, Sonic.exe). Try to improve, and find ways to create a more original story. I'm sure you're capable of writing something good.