Talk:Minecraft Haters they pay/@comment-2601:603:5080:DDA:4572:1872:8777:87F5-20190331161315

Instead of just calling this cringy, why don't I just give it criticism??

Alright, for one, use punctuation and compound sentences. I do understand if English is not your first language, but you can just type it in your first language if that is the case.

Also, PLEASE work on your storytelling. Character build-up first, THEN you can go to the creepy stuff. How are we supposed to care about the character if we don't understand anything about them?

And that's all I have for now! Happy writing!